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This is gorgeous.

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Thank you so much Tizz!

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It’s my sincere pleasure. I loved your poem.

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Smiling!

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Stunning and searing, Jena. You packed so much into so few words—even with those adjectives! I learn so much when I read your work. Thank you for being you.

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Thank you Audrey! I’m so glad you liked it. Feel the same about your writing you know.

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Well done!

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Thank you! How do you like the reading. Should I do more? It was kind of fun :-)

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Absolutely beautiful and profound, Jena! A poetic sermon……🙏!

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Awww thank you, Leon. It sure wanted to be born!

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Wow! Nice portrayal in 81 words!

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Thank you This one (with my recording) is slightly longer because I love me some good adjectives. HUGS!

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